Monday, August 31, 2015

Dogs are better that Cats - Term 4 Week 5

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.
Success Criteria:
  1. I plan for a writing task
  2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
  3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
  4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
  5. I use capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
  6. Use persuasive language

DOGS MAKE WAY BETTER PETS THAN CATS!!!


I strongly believe that Dogs are better than Cats!


Furthermore, if you have a fun dog you can throw a frisbee or a ball at them to catch. To be honest it’s fun for your dogs and fun for you, and cats cannot catch a ball in their mouth or a frisbee.  Another point is you can teach them how to do ROLLY POLLYS, because my dog can do Rolly pollys.


Another reason is if you train your dog they can get your newspaper for you and cats cannot because they don’t have big enough mouths. Dogs keep your house safe, if there is a burglar they will bark and wake you up so you can call the police, unfortunately cats don’t, they would go meow very quietly and won’t wake you up.


For an example, you get fitter from walking your dogs and your dogs get fitter as well, but you cannot really walk your cats. One more reason is that you could take long walks with your dogs but you cannot with your cat because they don’t like going for long walks!

Therefore I believe that dogs are better than cats! Woof!




4 comments:

  1. Hi Ruby
    Star I think you done very good at persuading me an I now
    Think that dogs are better that cats

    Star I love how you added you goal and the success criteria
    It really came clear when you told me you goal

    Mission today Ruby you don't have a mission

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  2. Star you persuaded me to think that dogs are better than cats

    Star I like how you added the success criteria

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  3. Well done Ruby L
    I think you are going well with posting.

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  4. ruby ruby love it i like the line where you wrote they can keep your house safe from burglers and other nasty people. anyway ilike it and love the dog gifs they so CUTE!!!

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