Thursday, June 11, 2015

Mum and Dad! Week 8

Chapter 1: The day we were creeped out!
Chapter 2: The search for Mum and Dad!
Chapter 3: Mum and Dad
Characters: Kalae, Sienna, Emma, Henrietta, Sophia, Mum, Dad and ME


Mum and Dad
Chapter 1 : The day we were creeped out!
One night when I was fast asleep, something woke me up. Was it the creepy noises? The light in my door or my open window? 
“What, where am I?” my friend Henrietta said.
“Ahhh, you scared me,” I said back.
I started walking to Sophia's room, then I saw Sophia, she had her legs crossed and her hand was holding a torch. I went in and said “ What is the matter?”
Sophia said back, “Something woke me up and I hear creepy noises."
I replied back, “Same with us.”
So we looked in my Mum and Dad’s bedroom to say what happened to us BUT their room was EMPTY. 
“How scary,” Henrietta said.

Chapter 2 : The search for Mum and Dad!
As quick as I could, I called Sienna, Kalae and Emma and said “My Mum and Dad are missing, can you help me find them?”
My friends replied back, “Of course we would.”
Once my friends got back, me and my friends and Sophia looked all around the house. Once everyone looked around the house we sat on the couch and all we could find was a little teddy bear (with one eye) ( It was creepy). So we threw it out the window and my dog ate it up...IT WAS GONE! 
Once everybody was sitting down on the couch I got  a phone call from Cowman (Cowman is the mean guy in the story) and he said, “Come to my place at midnight, and if you don’t come your Mum and Dad will be staying with me.” 
“Dirty Cowman, so will we go at midnight?” said Henrietta.
“Yes, we will go at midnight,” I said back.

Chapter 3: Mum and Dad!
So I set my alarm for 11.00 (I did it an hour before, because the girls have to get their makeup on). So when it was 11.00, the girls woke up and put their makeup on. At 11.30, we were in the car, Sophia drove us to a place and up on the top of the building it said Kidnappers Place! 
“How FREAKY,” said Henrietta.
“You are right,” I said. 
So we went in the backdoor and we tiptoed up the stairs. A few minutes later Cowman appeared in front of the door. 
“Do you want your mum and dad, and who are these people?” said Cowman.
“Yes please, and also they are my backup people,” I said.
“Paper, scissors, rock to see who wins,” said Cowman.
“Of course,” I replied back.
Guess what I did? Rock and he did Scissors! 
“Ha ha, Cowman,” I said.
That was the best day of my life.                  
What a Nightmare!

7 comments:

  1. Wow! Ruby that was very interesting to read. It made me all kinds of emotions and I LOVED it.

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  2. Great detail Ruby it's seems that it would've seemed really scary if your mum and dad was with an evil person and if you didn't get to cowmans house at 12 at midnight. If I was you I would not think it was the best day of my life. I like how you made it enteristing for the reader and put humor in it like when you found one eyeball you chucked it out the window and your dog ate it. Wow Ruby keep up the great work. GREAT WORK RUBY :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

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  3. Wow! Ruby that was very interesting to read and I liked how you described it and a had a lot of info and I LOVED it.

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  4. WOW RUBY!! I love how you let Me be In your story It Is so scary that I think I might have nightmares. You did some super duper work

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    1. But I wrote it because it was my nightmare

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  5. What a good story ruby it is good it is not a real one

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  6. Hi Ruby L

    I like how you have put this blog into a sort of chapter book. I like how you have two chapters in this blog. Keep up the good work :D

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