Cry Baby
I Ate a Cry baby
My Family Dared me
Wasn’t sour for a minute
And then fell in the sea
I squinted the whole time
It Steamed My Ears
I sprinted to the Fridge
Then broke into tears
Tears poured like rivers from my eyes
Then I had to Shout
My tongue was swelling up fast
It would of been better if I went without
“ I want another one”
Great job Ruby I like the way that you wrote that your "tongue was swelling up fast". Also at the end I like how you wanted another one.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Ruby. I love your poem that you wrote I like it because in one of the bits you wrote "I sprinted to the Fridge then broke into tears". That's an awesome sentence to put in your poem. Also love the way you have setup the writing with the bright colours and at the end you wrote it in red. Awesome job Ruby Keep It Up =)
ReplyDeleteThanks Livy for always commenting on my blog and they are always positive. Thank you Livy :)
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