Deadly Monster - Week 2

One day when my class was writing on our computers, out of nowhere came a big deadly monster.  
I ran up to Mrs Miller and said, ”There is a big scary monster outside the window”. 
Mrs Miller said back,“There’s no such thing as a monster” 
Then I said, "Look outside” and then Mrs Miller saw the monster. 
“OMG” said Mrs Miller. 
I thought in my head, we’ll be fine because we are in a classroom and then the monster put its hand in the window and the glass broke. 
“Ahhhhhhhhh” I shouted.  
Then Mrs Miller fainted, and my class screamed, even the boys because we didn't have help. After Mrs Miller fainted, the monster put his face through the window and took Mrs Miller and ate her.  When the monster ate Mrs Miller it took all the boys and Bradley said, "I’m too pretty to die” and the monster ate them in one gulp and burped in the girls faces and the girls screamed really loud.

After the monster burped in the girls faces,  the monster picked up Kady, Kalae, Talya, Jasmine, Maiya and Ruby.H.
The deadly monster said, "I’m going to eat you up!” 
Ruby.H shouted in a mean way, "No you’re not!” and then kicked the monster and the monster screamed and let go all the girls. He burped up Mrs Miller but didn't burp up the boys. 
“Ha ha ha” the girls said to the boys.
The boys heard and said, "O golly gosh”.